This is the second and final episode of the story Chhoo Mantar. Please read the first part for continuity (https://punctuationsandmore.blogspot.com/2026/08/chhoo-mantar.html ). The story so far in brief:
The Kingdom of Kano is in the evil grasp of Bela, the
witch, who has control over some magic berries that keep the sick princess
alive. She is impersonating as the queen after banishing the real queen to a
faraway place. The witch has a twin sister, Leela, who tends to her grandson
Rumi, the shepherd boy. The two are planning to rescue the kingdom from the
evil clutches of the witch.
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“So, Dadi what is the plan? I am
sure you have already chalked it out in your mind last night,” asked an excited
Rumi, rubbing his eyes and smiling cheek to cheek.
“Keeping in mind who we are up against,
we have to act with speed and stealth. The whole operation must be completed flawlessly
in three days flat. If our plot gets busted, the enemy will come down hard not
just on us but will also strike the two weak points of the royal household- the
banished queen mother and the sick princess.”
“Dadi, when you talk of we and
us, you mean we will have more people on our side while doing this rescue
mission?”
“No. It will be just the two of
us to maintain utmost secrecy. I will do the planning and provide some help;
the difficult part of execution will have to be done by you alone. Are you
ready to undertake this dangerous mission?”
Rumi’s face became serious and
his eyes gave a piercing look. He went silent for a few seconds and then thumped
his right fist on his chest and shouted, “I am ready, Dadi.”
The two sat down together for a
long time, and while Dadi spoke, Rumi kept listening to her attentively. He was
memorising every step, every detail that the old lady was sharing. She was
scribbling something on pieces of small papers which looked like maps with
markings. He kept nodding his head once in a while, and by the time she was
done talking, the young lad once more gave her a big smile, stood up and then
bent down to touch the old woman’s feet seeking her blessings. She pulled him
up, gave him a tight hug and kissed his cheeks while tears kept flowing from
her eyes. She knew what dangers lay ahead.
Day One
Rumi took his flock towards the
side where his Dadi had told him of the place where the real queen was being
held captive. As he came near the place, he saw that a cluster of huts but one of
them looked different, secluded and protected. When he saw a number of armed
guards hiding carefully behind boulders and trees in the periphery of that hut,
Rumi was sure that he had arrived at the right place. He went slightly away
from the spot and asked one of his sheep to lay down and bleat aloud as if in
great pain. The loyal sheep did as was told and then Rumi started running
towards the village shouting, “Help, help…tiger, tiger…”
Hearing his shouts, some
villagers picked up wooden sticks and ran towards the spot. Rumi went to some
of the guards and asked them for their help. They consulted each other and
immediately abandoned their posts and joined the villagers to drive away the intruding
tiger. Rumi took this opportunity to run
to the queen’s hut where he saw that the main door had a sort of a tray slot at
the lower end and was merely bolted from the outside without a lock. Rumi
unbolted the door and the moment he saw a lady in simple clothes, he went down
on his knees and bowed to her in complete obeisance.
“Who are you and why are you
here?”
“I am Rumi and am here to take
you away from this prison.”
“I will not go anywhere because
if the witch comes to know about my escape, she will kill my only daughter.”
“You have to trust me. My Dadi is
the twin sister of Bela, the witch, and she will help us in defeating the evil
woman. She knows the good magic that can defeat the dark one but before that we
need you on our side.”
“I have heard about Bela’s twin
sister but have never met her. Why should I trust you?”
“Look at this bracelet on my
wrist. My Dadi knew you would not
believe my words and so gave this to me. Their father had got this unique pair
of silver bracelets made for the two sisters.
Tell me, is this not the same bracelet you would have seen on the
witch’s wrist?”
“Yes, I do remember having seen
bracelet like this on her wrist.”
The boy looked innocent and the
queen got convinced. Both of them rushed towards the entrance door where a
woolly sheep stood, munching and smiling at them. Rumi, pushed the sheep inside
the hut and bolted the hut and the duo ran towards the back of the hut which
was in the opposite direction to where the guards had gone. He followed the
route that his granny had drawn for him and made an exit without the guards
realising that a daring escape had taken place right under their noses. The two
ran for a long time and when they felt that no one was following them, they stopped
near a flowing stream to drink some water and rest a while. The queen asked the
boy, “Why did you leave your sheep inside the hut?”
“My queen, the guards will be
sliding the meals meant for you through the slot in the door and later pulling
back the empty plate periodically. The woolly inside is a great muncher and will
make no noise as long as he is kept well fed. He will gobble up the food and
the guards will not come to know that you are missing from inside. All we need
is three clear days to execute our complete rescue plan. The woolly sheep is our
Trojan Horse in this Odyssey.”
“That’s quite an ingenious plan!”
They reached the granny’s house
where the queen felt the safety of a home after years of captivity. The Day One
task had been accomplished successfully and all felt happy.
Day Two
Rumi hardly slept that night. He
was feeling very happy at having accomplished his first task. He had been
giggling a bit in his bed when he remembered his woolly inside the hut and how
he had fooled the soldiers who did not know whom they were feeding. He,
however, knew that today would be a much bigger day of ultimate daring action.
Leela accompanied Rumi to the
banyan tree and waited for the horseman to arrive from the castle. The horseman
was surprised to see an old lady and a young lad as he began disembarking. The moment he got off the horse, Leela drew
her wand, pointed it at him and the man turned into a woolly sheep. She then
pointed the wand towards Rumi who now turned into a tiny mouse. She carried the
Rumi to the wet patch where she released him. Rumi went beneath the surface and
realised that there was a proper tunnel going deep inside. He kept on sliding
lower and lower till he hit a hard surface. As he fell, the bell around his
neck, which was originally with the horseman and later given by Leela to him,
made a jingling noise. Even though the bell had been turned into a miniature to
match his own size, the noise it made was pretty loud which led to the dark
chamber below getting magically illuminated. Rumi got very scared as he saw that
the place was swarming with snakes. Rumi knew that the snakes loved eating rats
and mice but he kept moving forward bravely. To his utter surprise, the snakes started
moving aside hearing the bell ring thereby allowing him to make his way to the
middle of the hall where a bowl with large number of red berries was kept. Rumi
crawled up the bowl and put two berries in a pouch kept ready there. The
original horseman would normally carry one berry a day but Rumi was following
his granny’s advice. He now started pulling the pouch slowly but steadily
towards the tunnel opening from where he had come inside the dark hole. Just as
he moved upwards, the lights went off and he felt a twirl of hot air that
pushed him upwards towards the surface.
Rumi came out of the hole and
Leela quickly changed him back into the shepherd boy and took the pouch from
him. They went to their hut where the queen had kept dinner for them. The two
ladies kissed Rumi many times and said that he was a very brave lad.
“Dadi, how will the berries help
our cause?”
“You sleep well tonight and
tomorrow we will have the biggest day.”
“But Dadi, I was hoping to fight
the enemy with swords and spears. When will that happen?”
“We are fighting an evil force
that is working with trickery and magic. Swords and spears are needed in a
different sort of combat arena. We are fighting trickery with our intelligence
and want peace and love to flourish in the Kingdom of Kano without much blood
being spilled.”
“That’s so wonderful Dadi. Good
night.”
Day Three
Rumi had slept well on the second
night and he felt fresh when he woke up. He was also excited for the action-packed
final day that lay ahead. The sun was shining bright and he looked out of the
window. He was completed bewildered when he saw outside a patch of land with
many tall vines with bunches of red berries hanging from them. He turned around
and saw his Dadi smiling. She said, “I used one of the berries you got
yesterday and created this garden overnight. Magic can surely be used for good
purpose. Now with these berries freely available, the princess will not have to
depend upon the witch and her soldiers for survival and that will free King Hano
and his kingdom from her control.”
After having a sumptuous
breakfast, Rumi and Leela went back to the banyan tree where the horse and the
sheep stood. Leela used her spell to make Rumi look exactly like the soldier in
full uniform and asked him to go to the castle with the remaining red berry.
She told him that she will also be coming to the castle herself separately.
As Rumi, in his soldier disguise,
closed in on the castle, he was unaware of the events developing in other parts
of the kingdom. The woolly inside the hut was enjoying the hospitality so much
that it had an urge to seek more food. The sheep started ramming the door with
his head from inside which caught the attention of the guards. After a while
they opened the door to find that the queen was no longer there and an
ill-tempered sheep was in her place. A guard quickly jumped on a steed and spurred
away to inform the witch in the castle.
Bela, the witch, came to the elevated
balcony of the palace and saw a soldier coming to the castle. She thought it
was the regular soldier who was bringing the magic berry for the princess
waiting at the entrance to the palace. Unaware of the rescue act that was taking
shape, she went to take her leisurely bath. Meanwhile, Rumi got off the horse at
the palace gate and saw the princess for the first time. She looked simply
heavenly beautiful. He put a finger on his lips signalling her to keep quiet as
he pulled out the berry and a diamond ring that the princess instantly
recognised as one that belonged to her mother. Rumi told her in muted voice about
the queen’s escape and asked the princess to eat the berry and ride out with
him without further delay. The princess wanted to go to her father once but
Rumi said that time was of utmost essence and her safety would be the key to force
open the witch’s vice-like hold over the king. The princess climbed on to the saddle
and sat holding Rumi who asked her to cover her face with a veil. He kicked the horse to a gallop and gained
speed in a short time. As he was exiting the castle gate, he saw another
horseman entering and shouting, “She has escaped… she has escaped!” Rumi knew something
had gone wrong somewhere so he pushed his horse harder. While speeding away, he
got a glimpse of his Dadi slowly making her way into the castle.
Hearing the horseman’s shouts,
Bela came back to the balcony hurriedly. She could now see at a distance the
princess riding away with a soldier. With both her hostages having escaped, a
furious Bela decided to capture the princess back. She ordered her guards to get
her Flying Fury chariot ready immediately while she dressed herself in full armour
with a sword and the magic wand tucked in the belt and a trident in her hand.
The chariot was a special one drawn by six white horse that could outrun anyone
on land, air and water. She took the reins in her own hands and charged towards
the castle gate. Seeing the queen in her chariot coming, the guards went to
open the big gates when Leela stepped forward. Bela was stunned seeing her twin
sister after so many years.
“So, it is you who is orchestrating
this plot against me? You will fail miserably, Leela.”
Leela gently drew her magic wand
out of her cloak. Seeing the wand, Bela exclaimed, “You are here to fight me
with a fake wand? This one cannot be father’s special wand for it was with him
when he died.”
“Father had given me his real
wand saying that I could use it just once in my lifetime. I had kept it safe
for so long waiting to use it only at the darkest hour to save our land. I am
sure, today is the day to defeat the empire of evil that you have created. I am going to stop you from doing any further
harm to the royal family and to the people of Kano.”
Bela picked up the trident and
threw it with all her power at Leela who just pointed her wand in its direction
to have it blown to smithereens. Bela knew that the conventional weapons would
not work in this fight. The battle would have to be the ultimate Wand to Wand
Fight (WWF). She pulled out her wand and was about to cast her deadliest spell
when a sword pierced her from behind and she collapsed. It was King Hano who
had caught Bela by surprise. He had heard the conversation of the two sisters
from his chamber and with the two loves of his life safe, he took to arms and
delivered the fatal blow. Blood oozed
out profusely from Bela’s body and soon her eyes shut. Hano pushed Bela’s
corpse out of the chariot and boarded it himself. He asked Leela join him and
take him to where his queen and princess were being kept.
Hano and his family were reunited
and there were big celebrations in the kingdom. Leela broke her father’s magic
wand and took care of the berry garden while Rumi refused to accept any gifts
from the king. He moved around with his flock, playing with the animals and
living a simple life with his granny. He was always invited to the royal
household on special occasions and given a place of honour.
And they all lived happily ever
after.
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